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Mary-Sue Test
Chosen Character: Landon Underwood
[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[x] They are physically strong
[x] They have a rare hair/fur colour (Its pink...)
[x] Their eyes are an unusual color (black demon eyes)
[ ] This happens to be red
[x] Their eyes change color (after he feeds on sex chi they glow red. And when he heals they get a reddish tint to them)
[x] They have wings (chibi wings!)
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[x] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large bra size.
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender (or he should be since he's an incubus)
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[x] They are a healer
[x] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents.
[ ] They ran away from home
[x] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. (Gerard, his father, is a butt. Milrose is awesome though)
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[x] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature: Dragon?
[ ] They never knew their parents
[x] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[x] They are very attractive to the same gender
[x] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ]They are emo/cutesy
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[x] They are currently in a relationship
[ ] They have lots if morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[ ] They are very intelligent
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[x] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet (a little kitty named Vivi who is a hell cat)
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name
[x] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc. (Valentines Day)
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood sometimes
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[x] They are from a different country to where they live (try another world)
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[x] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[x] They are very patient
[x] They are from a long line of (Incubus)
[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (A leather collar, and then a black diamond belly piercing)
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] The have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia
Overall Points: 22
Point Reductions
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[ ] They have a short temper
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless in some forms
Final: 22
Final Score is: Borderline Mary-Sue (odd, everyone loves him)
5 -Anti-Sue Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.
6-15 -Balanced Character If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
25+ -Mary-Sue
8 OC's MeMe
1. Choose 8 OC's, if you don't have eight, borrow some off of friends!
2. No changing the questions!
3. Tag some people after wards.
4. Add some questions of your own if you want!
5. Have fun.
1) Landon
2) Misha
3) Sasha
4) Diedrick
5) Talon
6) Lolo
7) Jackal
8) Olly
1) You are reading in a tree and then [1] calls for you; what does he/she want?
What??? What do you mean reading in a tree???
I can't!
First off, I'm allergic. ;A;
Second... ever seen a fat person climb a tree?
I thought so.
2) [5] tells you he/she needs help with an outfit because he/she is going out on a date with someone.
Really Talon, a date? Since when do you do dates?
"Since my pussy cat is so beautiful. I feel the need to show her off." Talon chuckles.
You just want public sex...
"Yes" Talon chuckles.
3) [4] wakes you up in the night to tell you a secret, what is it?
"I hate Molly. Not that, that is a secret"
Diedrick!
4) [3] falls for you! What do you do?
Uh.... Sorry Sasha I don't swing that way.
Sasha makes a face. "I don't swing that way either."
Then we are good.
5) [7] and [1] are fighting over you. Do you stop them or walk away?
"MINE!" Landon cries, tackling me.
"No fair!" Jackal yells, flopping down on Landon.
I'm being crushed...
"I will save you!" Jackal declares, jerking Landon off and pushing him aside. He hugs me, licking my face. "She is mine!"
Landon pouts. "But.... I want her to be mine."
6) You see [2] and [8] kissing! How do you feel?
o.o
Misha I never knew you had it in you, and Olly... Gasp!
Misha blushes. "I, it..." She stammers, covering her mouth, eyes wide.
"I want Master" Olly whimpers.
7) [6] asks you if you have a boyfriend/girlfriend.
Nope, I do not Lolo.
8) You all go to a theme park for the day and you go on a roller coaster! Only you get stuck at the very top with [2]
AHHHHHHHHHH MISHA I HATE HIGHTHS!
(hug of death)
WHY DID I LISTEN TO FRISKEN TALON???
9) You save [7] by doing his/her homework for him/her, he/she gives you a kiss on the cheek!
Hehe, Jackal kisses!
Jackal snickers, licking my face, tail wagging. <-- in hell hound form now for some reason.
10) [1] tries to tell [6] how he/she feels about him/her, you hear all of this.
"Lolo, I um...err... I wanna tell you something" Landon mutters nervously.
(presses ear to door)
I feel something interesting going on....
"What do you need to tell me?" Lolo asks in a happy voice.
"Well you see... I....That is.... I...well..." Landon stumbles.
Lolo laughs, sounds of clothes rustling coming though the crack in the door. "Come on Lani, it's ok. Tell me"
"I LIKE YOU!" Landon shouts, smacking me in the face as he runs out the door.
ow ma face...
Lolo is left staring at the doorway, speechless.
11) What is the worst name [4] has ever called you?
;A; He called me a stupid bitch.
12) [3] adds you as a friend on Facebook.
SASHA!
accepted...
13) You come home late and [1] tells you that someone called for you earlier but you weren't in.
"Verbayne, someone called you earlier" Landon says.
Who was it?
"Someone by the name of," He pulls a little piece of paper out of his pocket. "Sawhorse? Is that a real name?"
pfft. Yes Landon. Yes it is.
14) You find out that [8] and [7] are going out.
No. Just no.
"No, this is not a thing. I quit" Jackal says dead serious.
Olly stares wide eyed. "'But...but he is my father! This can't happen! I don't accept this question."
15) Who do you love most out of [2] and [6]?
Sorry Misha, Lolo I love you!
(hugs)
Lolo laughs, hugging me back and nuzzling my neck.
"It's ok" Misha says with a smile.
16) [4] walks in on you showering, how do you react?
(scream of death)
"Why me." Diedrick grumbles, stomping out. "Lock the fucking door!"
Knock on the fucking door!
17) [8] gives you a golden bracelet for you birthday, how do you thank them?
Olly ;A; I lurv it. I shall gift you Lane for your, and Lolo's, birthday.
18) [1] is STILL trying to get [6]!
Landon rubs his pink head. "Lolo...do you want to....you know....um..."
Lolo hugs Landon, burying his face in the other mans neck. "I don't think I can. Sorry Lani."
"O..o...ok" Landon stammers, slightly flush.
19) [5] takes you rock climbing and falls, do you catch him/her in time?
Are you kidding me? Hes a grown ass man demon. There is no way I can catch him...or rock climb.
"Besides that," Talon says, wings flapping to keep him air born. "I can fly."
20) Anything to say before this quiz is over?
Funny, verrrrrrry funny.
101 Questions for Landon
101 Questions You Should Be Able to Answer About Your Character
(Must be in OC's POV)
Character: Landon
BASICS
1. What is your full name? Do you have a nickname?
Landon Underwood.
Mom and Megan call me Lani. Alvernon calls me Denny.
2. How old are you? When is your birthday?
I'm 19 and my birthday is Valentines day.
3. Where were you born? Where do you live now? Are you patriotic?
In the demon world called Nephllia. I just moved into an apartment in America somewhere... Yes?
4. Who are/were your parents? (Names, occupations, personalities, etc.)
My mom, Milrose, is an heiress to a million dollar mining company.
My dad, Gerard, is a lawyer.
5. Do you have any siblings? What are/were they like?
Nope, only child.
6. What is your occupation?
I don't have one yet.
7. How tall are you? How much do you weigh?
I don't know...maybe 5'10? I'm over 5'5.... I dont know that either, I'm skinny but muscley if that helps?
8. What color is your hair? What color are your eyes?
PINK! MY HAIR IS PINK! And my eyes are black because I'm a demon.
9. What is your race?
Incubus
10. To which social class do you belong?
Upper
11. Do you consider yourself to be attractive? Do others?
Uh, Molly calls me cute a lot?
12. What is your style of dress?
Anything comfortable, suits are to constrictive.
13. Do you have any scars? Tattoos? Birthmarks? Other unique physical features?
I have a tail, and wings, does that count?
14. Do you have any allergies, diseases, or other physical weaknesses?
Nope, demons are relatively healthy.
15. Are you right- or left-handed?
Uh, both?
16. What does your voice sound like?
... How do I answer that?
Ummm Sometimes, when I talk to my parents, I have a southern accent
17. What kind of vocabulary do you use?
Normal?
18. List three quirks or other defining characteristics.
MY PINK HAIR!
19. How often do you bathe? Do you wear perfumes?
Every other day. I have collogue but I don't use it.
20. What kind of facial expression do you commonly wear (dour glare, wry smile, etc)?
I normally smile.
21. Do you use body language? How?
Err...
22. Do you have a commonly used saying?
Pink hair is awesome.
23. What is your earliest memory?
My earliest memory would have to be..... Oh! When me and Carry accidently dropped her pet cat Muffins in the toilet.
24. How much schooling have you had? Did you enjoy it?
I just graduated Highschool.
No.... people beat me up every day.... I even died once from it...
25. Where did you learn most of your knowledge and skill?
School.
26. How would you describe your childhood in general?
It was great until middle school. Things went downhill from there.
27. As a child, what did you want to be when you grew up?
A sculpture! I still do, I just need to pick it back up.
28. When and with whom was your first kiss?
My childhood friend Carry.
29. Are you a virgin? If not, when and with whom did you lose your virginity?
I...err....um...uh.... Alvernon...
30. Do you have a notorious or celebrated ancestor? Does that affect you?
I think he was my great uncle. He's the reason my mom's side of the family is rich.
INFLUENCES
31. What do you consider the most important event of your life so far?
Meeting Alvernon.
32. What do you consider your greatest achievement?
Graduating highschool, I didn't think I was ever going to.
33. What is your greatest regret?
Not being able to be there for my best friend when it counted most.
34. What is the most embarrassing or shameful thing ever to happen to you?
Being branded with a lighter.
35. Do you have any secrets? If so, what are they?
I don't really have any, I don't think...
36. What is the most evil thing you have ever done?
I don't really do things like that...
37. When was the time you were the most frightened?
When I was the most frightened. Well I guess that would be when... I don't really know...
38. Have you ever traveled outside of your country? If so, to where?
hehe to the human world from Nephllia.
BELIEFS
39. What is your alignment?
Uh, unspecified?
40. Are you basically optimistic or pessimistic?
Optimistic!
41. Do you believe in a god? If so, which one and why?
Can a demon believe in God?
42. Do you believe in an afterlife?
My kind reincarnate, so not really.
43. What is your greatest fear?
That I won't have the strength to keep my promise.
(I.E kill himself like Carry did)
44. What makes you angry? Sad? Happy? Why?
People hurting others makes me angry because I get beat up a lot and I don't want someone else to go through that. I get sad when I think about Carry, because.... I'm happy when I'm with my friends, and Alvey cause I love them.
45. Do you think people are basically good or basically evil?
Good, everyone is born good. The actions and environment they group up in will change then for better or worse.
46. What are your views on politics?
I try to stay out of it.
47. What are your views on gambling, lying, theft, and killing?
Um. Gambling is fun, lying is normally bad, theft is bad, killing is unforgivable.
48. How far will you go to defend your beliefs?
I won't fight someone over it, if that's what you mean. To each their own as Verbayne says.
49. How much do you value money?
I grew up as a rich kid, but I don't think money is something to be thrown away on useless things. I like to save up.
50. In your opinion, what is the most evil thing any human being could do?
The most evil thing... Put someone down so much they think taking their own life is the better option.
51. Do you believe in self-sacrifice for the greater good?
I'll sacrifice myself for my friends and loved ones.
52. Do you believe in the existence of soul mates and/or true love?
Of course I do.
53. Are you superstitious?
Not really.
54. How much do you respect the beliefs and opinions of others?
They matter to me.
55. How honest are you about your thoughts and feelings?
I try to be honest, but sometimes I keep things to myself.
56. Do you have any biases or prejudices?
No, I treat everyone and everything equally.
DEALING WITH OTHERS
57. Who is the most important person in your life, and why?
Uh, I guess you could say its Alvernon because he's my boyfriend.
58. Who is the person you respect the most? Despise the most? Why?
I respect everyone... but... Trey I guess? I don't know...
59. Do you have a significant other? Who? Why?
Alvernon <3
60. Do you have a lot of friends? Who is your best friend?
Yes! I love making friends. I don't think I have a best friend... It might be Talon...
61. How do you relate to members of the same race? Class? Sex?
They all hate me.
62. How do you relate to members of a different race? Class? Sex?
Uh...
63. Have you ever been in love? If so, describe what happened.
She... It didnt work out.
65. How close are you to your family?
I'm close to my mom. My dad kind of doesn't like me anymore...
66. Do you want a marriage, family, and/or children?
I wouldn't be against it, but I don't think I can.
67. Do you tend to argue with people, or avoid conflict?
Avoid it, unless it's about my hair. Because my hair is awesome.
68. Are you a listener or a talker?
Little of both.
69. How long does it usually take for you to trust others?
I trust easy.
70. Do you hold grudges?
Nope, well maybe some. Ok I hold grudges.
71. Do you tend to take on leadership roles in social situations?
I'd rather follow someone else's lead, but if the situation called for it I could take the lead.
72. Do you like interacting with large groups of people?
Yes! It's fun to hang out with so many people.
73. How well do you express yourself?
I think I do a pretty good job.
74. How quickly do you judge others?
I try not to judge people.
75. Do you care what others think of you?
I kind of do.
76. Do you have any enemies? How or why are they your enemy?
Yeah, most of the kids at school. Shouhei is the worst though, he hates me because I'm a pure blood incubus who is openly gay.
PERSONAL TASTE AND OPINIONS
77. What is your favorite passtime? Color? Food? Possession?
My favorite past time is sneaking out at night to visit Carry. PINK! I love pizza and my favorite possession is the leather collar Carry gave to me for my 16th birthday.
78. What are your preferences in arts and/or entertainment?
Preferences?
79. Do you smoke, drink, go whoring, or use drugs? Why or why not?
No, Molly wants to get me drunk, no, and no. It's just not something I'm interested in.
80. How do you spend a typical Saturday night?
I spend time with my friends. I got a cat now though, so I might sculpt my kitty. X3
81. What is your most cherished fantasy?
I don't know what you mean by that... If I had to guess at your meaning I would say it's having Carry still here so she could met Alvernon.
82. How long is your attention span?
Depends.
83. Do you laugh a lot? What do you find funny?
Yes, and many things are funny to me.
84. Is there anything that shocks or offends you? If so, what?
Good question...
85. How do you deal with stress?
Fly around.
86. How much athletic ability do you have? Artistic?
I played baseball in middle school so I guess I'm athletic. I sculpted a life size replica of my mother that someone bought for like $700. Mom bought it back from them and has it displayed in entrance way in the house.
87. Do you like animals? Do you like children?
KITTY!!!
88. Are you spontaneous, or do you always need to have a plan?
I never plan for anything anymore, nothing goes how I want it.
89. Do you have a pet? If so, what is his/her name? Species? Fur color?
I HAVE A KITTY!!! Her name is Vivi and she is adorable! Her fur is black, and her left ear is white tipped, and her eyes are blue, and,and, and, and, KITTY!
SELF-IMAGE
90. What is your greatest strength as a person? Weakness?
I'm adorable? I don't know. I guess my strength is also my weakness. I'm too nice to people.
91. If you could change one thing about yourself, what would it be?
My species.
92. Are you generally introverted or extroverted?
Am I what?
93. Do you like yourself?
Eh, mostly.
94. Do you have a daily routine? How do you feel if your day is interrupted?
Not really.
95. What goal do you most want to accomplish in the next six months? Your lifetime?
Um, get back into my sculpting and get a job that involves doing something with it if I can. Or Collage, Collage works.
96. Where do you see yourself in 5 years? 10 years? 20 years?
Uh... I want to have graduated collage at some point. That's all I can really think of, I have no serious set goals.
97. If you could choose, how would you want to die?
What kind of question is that?! Ahh.... I've already died once but I reincarnate so I don't think it matters?? I'm scared now...
98. What is the one thing you would like to be remembered for after your death?
That I didn't give up, I didn't let the others tear me down and break me. I took what they threw at me and stood tall till the end.
99. What three words would you use to best describe your personality?
Caring, funny, and um... adorable?
100. What three words would others probably use to describe you?
I don't know... As I've said Molly says I'm adorable and cute. So Adorable, cute, and lovable?
101. Why are you risking your life to adventure?
KITTIES AND PINK HAIR!!!
Five OC's
Choose five OC's
1) Diedrick
2) Landon
3) Lillian
4) Sasha
5) Abby
Answer the questions XD
1. What's your name? Who's your favorite character out of the five OC's you chose?
Um... this is a creepy question...
LANDON!!! My cuteness!
2. Right. Why do you like him/her so much? What makes them your favorite?
Landon is adorable! (hugs)
3. How does he/she feel about this?
A large grin spreads across Landon's face. "I love it!" he laughs, tail wagging behind him.
4. Interesting. Moving on. Who is your least favorite out of the OC's you chose? And what's your favorite color?
Blue, duh.
"I love pink!" Landon cheers, petting his pink hair.
I hate Abby.
5. You could have hurt his/her feelings! OC! Tell your Author how you feel!
"F--- you" Abby growls.
Abby, I dont think you can say that >.> Bad confusing bitch-whore, bad...
6. How do the other OC's feel about not being chosen as a favorite or as a least favorite?
Diedrick grunts. "I don't care."
Pfft, Molly is going to kill me, and hug the crap out of you.
Diedrick says nothing.
Lillian pokes Diedrick's arm. "Be nice." She tells him with a frown then turns to me. "It's ok, I don't mind. At least you put me on the list." she says with a smile.
Sasha cowers behind a tree, ears pressed flat against her head, white tail curled around her ankle.
7. Now it's your OC's turn! OC's, choose who you like best out of your Author or from the fellow characters that were chosen!
Diedrick snorts. "Lillian"
Sure you dont mean Molly?
"Yes." Diedrick grumbles, then turns and leaves.
Sorry Molly, I tried.
Lillian grins, hugging Landon's arm. "I think Landon is the best!"
Landon blinks. "Wha? Better then Diedrick??"
"Yup." Lillian giggles.
"YES!" Landon cheers, hugging Lillian tightly.
Abby shakes her head. "Who gives a crap?"
Sasha stares with her silver eyes. "Landon."
"I'm loved!" Landon shouts, grinning like an idiot.
8. Nice. Do you have a favorite part in your story?
Uh... Landon, Diedrick, Sasha, and Lillian don't have a story...
"The part where I get left the hell alone." Abby snaps, arms crossing over her chest.
9. Now, how about a least favorite part?
Abby narrows her eyes. "People poking my chest."
Pfft, your never letting that go are you?
"Nope"
10. Oh no! It seems we've reached the end! Hopefully nothing too back happened on this adventure of questions!
Diedrick ran away again to avoid Molly...
Landervon Ship
The first rays of dawn filter through a gap in the curtains, falling upon the face of a man. He stirs Rising from the soft comfort of the bed, brown eyes blinking rapidly, trying to adjust to the change of light. He sits up half sighing as he rubs his face, trying to wake up. The shift in position pulls the sheets into his lap, uncovering the sleeping figure next to him. A small smile creases the man's lips, hand running through his brown hair in an attempt to tame the vicious bed head he had.
He turns ever so slightly to look at the smooth tanned back of his lover, a pair of palm sized dragon wings floating behind their shoulders. A small whimper rises from the sheets, that smooth back moving some as they sink into the warmth of the sheets and away from the cold air gathering on their back. Shaking his head the man throws his legs over the edge of the bed, beginning to rise. Something pulls at his waist, his lover sliding out from under the sheets towards him. The man turns, seeing a familiar furry black shape wrapped around his waist.
He chuckles quietly to himself, fingers playing along the black furred tail clinging to him. "I have to go, Landon." He says quietly, almost sweetly, as he strokes the tail on his waist. "Let go."
The tail loosens and eventually falls to the bed with a small thump. It the proceeds to slid across the bed and drape itself over its owners legs. Another whimper rises from the bed, the man's lover, Landon, shifting in discomfort. Arms wrapping around a pillow Landon curls into a ball around it, whining in his sleep for the man to come back. The man chuckles again, leaning over the bed and pulling the sheet over Landon slowly.
Landon shifts again, snuggling under the warmth of the sheet. He inhales deeply, a small smile curling on his lips as he exhales contently. The whispered name of the man falling from his lips.
"Alvey."
The man chuckles, stroking Landon's pink hair gently. Memories of their night drift through his head making him smile wider. Leaning over the man brushes Landon's bangs from his face, lips barely touching his forehead. Landon reacts to the feel of the man's lips, even asleep, by moving his head up to press their lips together for a kiss. Twisting in the bed Landon's arms sweep out, grabbing the man and pulling him back into the bed.
"Mine" Landon says in a sleep heavy voice. The man laughs, falling back on the bed, arms braced so he didn't fall on top of Landon to hard. Landon smiles, eyes fluttering open. He moves forward, still half asleep, and kisses the man. "Mine" he whispers again.
The man smiles against Landon's lips. "Yours" he mumbles, kissing him back.